Hallo liebe community !
In den nächsten Tagen steht eine Klassenarbeit an und ich wollte mich vorher nochmal kurz vorbereiten. Und zwar müssen wir unter anderem eine kurze Inhaltsangabe über eine bekannte Firma schreiben. Ich wäre euch sehr dankbar, wenn ihr kurz drüberschauen könntet, da meine sprachlichen Fähigkeiten durch mein geringes Vokabular nicht sehr gut sind. (verbesser ich gerade durch fleißiges lesen..)
Wäre über weitere Tipps sehr dankbar! (z.B. wie ich den Schluss schreiben könnte..oder ob ich überhaupt einen Schluss schreiben muss ? was ich vergessen hab? andere Übergänge..etc)
Hier der ursprüngliche Text:
Mein summary:
The short article “LEGO” ,which you can find online, deals with the facts about the LEGO company and how it grows up from the past to one of the famoust company worldwide.
The LEGO company, which is still in the handing of the family, was founded by Ole Kirk Christansen, who lived in the little town Billund in Denmark. In 1932 he had the brilliant idea to sell wooden toys to other companies. Through this he get very famous and two years later he called his company LEGO, which does come from the Danish and mean “play well”. Now the company is one of the biggest companies worldwide, who produces bricks. It has more than 6000 workers in 130 different countries and earn 1bn euros. Furthermore the company produces over 19 billion bricks in one year and millions of children and older people play with them at home. Not forgetting that you can do extraordinary things just with the bricks like constructing a huge town or something else. At this moment the new present owner is Kjeld Kirk Kristiansen who offer robots from popular films.
All in all... ?
mfg
In den nächsten Tagen steht eine Klassenarbeit an und ich wollte mich vorher nochmal kurz vorbereiten. Und zwar müssen wir unter anderem eine kurze Inhaltsangabe über eine bekannte Firma schreiben. Ich wäre euch sehr dankbar, wenn ihr kurz drüberschauen könntet, da meine sprachlichen Fähigkeiten durch mein geringes Vokabular nicht sehr gut sind. (verbesser ich gerade durch fleißiges lesen..)
Wäre über weitere Tipps sehr dankbar! (z.B. wie ich den Schluss schreiben könnte..oder ob ich überhaupt einen Schluss schreiben muss ? was ich vergessen hab? andere Übergänge..etc)
Hier der ursprüngliche Text:
The company’s flagship product is the famous basic LEGO brick. It makes 19 billion elements every year and estimates that around 400 million children ‘of all ages’ (meaning adults too!) play with them. The modern product range includes a lot more than just bricks, however. You can build whole towns out of LEGO. There are your favourite figures from movies, and the latest robots – which you program from a computer – can move and speak.
Like many of today’s famous companies, LEGO began as something very small. The founder was Ole Kirk Christiansen, a carpenter in the Danish town of Billund, who in 1932 began making and selling wooden toys. They became so popular that in 1934 he gave them the name LEGO from the two Danish words
‘Leg godt’ (= play well). He had no idea that in Latin ‘lego’ can mean ‘I put together’. With global operations in 130 countries, 6,000 employees worldwide, and an annual turnover of over 1 bn euros, LEGO is now the world’s fifth biggest toy manufacturer. It is still family owned and its headquarters are still in Billund. The present owner is Kjeld Kirk Kristiansen,
the grandson of the founder.
Mein summary:
The short article “LEGO” ,which you can find online, deals with the facts about the LEGO company and how it grows up from the past to one of the famoust company worldwide.
The LEGO company, which is still in the handing of the family, was founded by Ole Kirk Christansen, who lived in the little town Billund in Denmark. In 1932 he had the brilliant idea to sell wooden toys to other companies. Through this he get very famous and two years later he called his company LEGO, which does come from the Danish and mean “play well”. Now the company is one of the biggest companies worldwide, who produces bricks. It has more than 6000 workers in 130 different countries and earn 1bn euros. Furthermore the company produces over 19 billion bricks in one year and millions of children and older people play with them at home. Not forgetting that you can do extraordinary things just with the bricks like constructing a huge town or something else. At this moment the new present owner is Kjeld Kirk Kristiansen who offer robots from popular films.
All in all... ?
mfg