Servus,
wir haben in Englisch ne Hausaufgabe bekommen, nen Text über einen Bericht aus dem Buch zu schreiben. Unsere Lehrer will das wahrscheinlich einsammeln, deshalb wäre es nett, wenn jemand von euch mal über die Grammatik schauen könnte!
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to comment on yor report about mobile phones. I agree that parents not give mobiles to very young children and I like your idea to protect the mobiles with PINs. And you are right, that this makes the streets safer for young people.
In my opinion, thiefs of mobile phones must be punish severly, so they do bad things like this never again. Another fact is, that the government must be critical towards consumerism, because when you are young and you haven’t got a mobile phone, you are nobody.
A possibility is, that the mobile-phone-producer makes their devices at a lower price and so, everybody can provide with a mobile. Also, this is good for the treasury because mobile phones are cheaper than the police.
Yours faithfully
Gruß
Tommy
wir haben in Englisch ne Hausaufgabe bekommen, nen Text über einen Bericht aus dem Buch zu schreiben. Unsere Lehrer will das wahrscheinlich einsammeln, deshalb wäre es nett, wenn jemand von euch mal über die Grammatik schauen könnte!
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to comment on yor report about mobile phones. I agree that parents not give mobiles to very young children and I like your idea to protect the mobiles with PINs. And you are right, that this makes the streets safer for young people.
In my opinion, thiefs of mobile phones must be punish severly, so they do bad things like this never again. Another fact is, that the government must be critical towards consumerism, because when you are young and you haven’t got a mobile phone, you are nobody.
A possibility is, that the mobile-phone-producer makes their devices at a lower price and so, everybody can provide with a mobile. Also, this is good for the treasury because mobile phones are cheaper than the police.
Yours faithfully
Gruß
Tommy