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Alt 07.12.2006, 22:23:12   #1 (permalink)
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Standard Englischen Text verbessern und 800K Lose abstauben!

Hallo,

Ich habe einen Text ins Englische übersetzt, und nun will ich wissen, ob ichs auch richtig gemacht habe...

WER MIR DEN VERBESSERT, KRIEGT 800K Lose (800.000Klammlose) ... Das sind doch leichtverdiente Lose oder?

Der erste, der sich meldet und mir die Fehler verbessert, kriegt die Lose...

Diese Aktion geht bis zum 8.Dezember 06 um 16Uhr!!!

Der Text:

Zitat:
The Empire State Building
The Empire State Building was planned 1928 [ nineteen hundred and twenty-eight ] and built on 17. [ seventeenth ] March 1930 [ nineteen hundred and thirty ] by 1. [ first ] May 1931 [ nineteen hundred and thirty-one ] . It was build in 410 [ four hundred and ten ] working days and is 381 [ three hundred and eighty-one ] meters high. With antenna it is even 443.2 [ four hundred and forty-three ] meters high and is the secondly largest building of the USA. It has 102 [ one hundred and two ] floors and 1576 [ one thousand five hundred and seventy-six ] stairway steps. In the world, it is even fourth-highest clouds, and on a clear day, one can see approximately 80 [ eighty ] miles far in five US Federal States, to New York, New Jersey, Pennsylvenia, Connecticut and Massachusetts. 1947 [nineteen hundred and forty-seven ] established around the prospect flat forum a 3 [ three ] meters high fence, nevertheless died so far 35 [ thirty-five ] humans at suicide. 4,5 [ four ] floors were built on the average in the week, over 3439 [ three thousand four hundred and thirty-nine ] workers, who worked occasionally. The workers wars wages of 1 [ one ] $ 92 [ ninety-two ] cent in the hour. Many the BLANK WORKER were of the trunk of the Mohawk Indians and them hit approx. 800 [ eight-hundred ] rivets on the day into the steel carriers. One working day began around 3:30 [ half past three AM ] clock and ended to 16:30 [ half past four PM ] clock and with the building of the Empire State Building 14 [ fourteen ] workers died. Inside the Empire State Building that particularly firmly and water-rejecting valid Lahn marble from Villmar in Hessen one used and has particularly beautiful colors. The opening celebration took place at the 1. [ first ] Mai 1931 [nineteen hundred and thirty-one ] with president Herbert Hoover, but into the 40's [ forties ] many offices stood empty. The observation deck into 320 [three hundred and twenty ] meters height was originally meant as airship landing place, but it functioned never correctly. Today the pointed of the Empire State Building serves as transmitting pole, and is lit starting from the break-down of the darkness to midnight. On Saturday, 28. [ twenty-eighth ] July a B [ BI ]-25 [ twenty-five ] -Bomber rests because of poor visibility and a navigational error in the 79. [ seventy-seventh ] Floor. Despite the large fire damage and 6 [ six ] meters a large hole did not suffer the building structural damage. Betty Lon of olive, which had suffered burns by the collision, should drive with an allegedly safe elevator into the lobby, but the cables of the elevator were destroyed and them much 74 [ seventy-four ] floors (more than 300 [ three hundred ] meters) into the depth. She survived and came into the Guinnes book of the records for the highest free case.
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Alt 08.12.2006, 13:13:03   #2 (permalink)
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hey

konnte mit den klammen nicht viel anfangen, da dort ja nur die zahlen in wörtern standen und hab sie deswegen gelöscht. ein paar kleine änderungen hab ich vorgenommen, jedoch find deinen text inhaltlich, sowie grammatisch sehr gut


Zitat:
The Empire State Building

The Empire State Building was planned in 1928 and built from 17. March 1930 to 1. May 1931. It was build in 410 working days and it is 381 meters high. With antenna it is even 443.2 meters high and it's the secondly largest building of the USA. It has 102 floors and 1576 stairway steps. In the world, it is even fourth-highest clouds, and on a clear day, one can see approximately 80 miles far in five US Federal States, to New York, New Jersey, Pennsylvenia, Connecticut and Massachusetts. 1947 established around the prospect flat forum a 3 meters high fence, nevertheless died so far 35 humans at suicide. 4,5 floors were built on the average in the week, over 3439 workers, who worked occasionally. The workers get wages of 1.92 $ per hour. Many the BLANK WORKER were of the trunk of the Mohawk Indians and them hit approx. 800 rivets on the day into the steel carriers. A working day began around 3:30 am and ended 4:30 pm and altogether 14 workers died. Inside the Empire State Building that particularly firmly and water-rejecting valid Lahn marble from Villmar in Hessen one used and has particularly beautiful colors. The opening celebration took place at the 1. Mai 1931 with president Herbert Hoover, but into the 40's many offices stood empty. The observation deck into 320 meters height was originally meant as airship landing place, but it functioned never correctly. Today, the pointed of the Empire State Building serves as transmitting pole, and is lit starting from the break-down of the darkness to midnight. On Saturday, 28. July a B-25-Bomber rests because of poor visibility and a navigational error in the 79. Floor. Despite the large fire damage and 6 meters a large hole did not suffer the building structural damage. Betty Lon of olive, which had suffered burns by the collision, should drive with an allegedly safe elevator into the lobby, but the cables of the elevator were destroyed and she felt 74 floors (more than 300 meters) into the depth. She survived and came into the Guinnes Book of Worldrecords for the highest free case.
 

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Alt 08.12.2006, 17:24:44   #3 (permalink)
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Hallo, danke, ich schicke dir die Lose...

die klammern waren da, weil ich das am MO vortragen muss, und das mit den Zahlen nicht sio gut auf die reihe kriege!

schön, dass er dir gefällt!

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Alt 08.12.2006, 17:37:02   #4 (permalink)
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danke vielmals
 
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